Looking good! Couple thoughts... you only get about five clicks - if someone isn't hooked on your work by then they are gone. Also, suggest you provide some hint at pricing, maybe nothing specific: "many weddings start at $XXXX." Most potential clients want to know if you are within their budget before they contact you. They don't want the embarrassment of contacting a celeb photog who wants $25K to start when their budget is only $3K.
Is your business model to make money on shooting the event or selling prints? I.e. big up front charge with reasonable, package print cost and/or DVD of jpg's versus modest fixed charge with expensive prints and no DVD.
What are your typical deliverables? Engagement shoot, wedding album, slide show, any video clips, DVD, individual prints, etc. Show potential clients what you can deliver.
Just my suggestions that may help you grow your business.